Tsangpo River
[/img]I watched a film on the National Geographic Channel, it was about Tsangpo river. This is my inspiration with this river and Himalayas... I hope you get enjoyable times by reading this.The...
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Hello Nia, I can see why this river is an inspiration. A few thoughts on your poem, I will not talk about the repetition which I've talked about else where.The Tsangpo River*You are flowing in thereas...
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The Tsangpo River*You are flowing in thereas an innocent riverthrough our life...orto say the opposite of this, can it be right?Our life flows away through the innocent flowing of yours...?This is a...
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My critique on your poem is just my opinion and is yours to do with as you wish. You may ask for clarification of what I say but there is no need to defend your poem. I am just one reader who is...
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Nia I am new to this site and i do not have a great deal of expertise in crits but I can tell you about what your poem made me feel and think.Reading this poem I became the man and the river. Your...
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Rhiannon,When I watched the film about Tsangpo river, I wrote this one. The end of the film was so sad. And my feelings in my mind met with these words... It is nice to hear that you feel and think...
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